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The next day, in school, as Daria has read all books assigned to English class, [[Timothy O'Neill|O'Neill]] gives her a special assignment: to write a fictional story using real persons as characters.
 
Daria finds difficulty with the work. At the Lane's, as [[Jane Lane|Jane]] is painting and making suggestions, Daria writes and throws away two drafts, one practicallyinspired a re-edition ofby the moviefilm ''[http[wikipedia://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Graduate_%28film%29 The_Graduate|The Graduate] movie]'', and the other heavily influenced by [[wikipedia:Jane_Austen|Jane Austen's [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sense_and_Sensibility Sense and Sensibility]]. At the MorgendorfferMorgendorffers's, Helen tries to probe her depressed daughter, offering advice and encouragement when Daria tells her about the assignment and her inability to write. However, between Eric's constant calls and an inadvertent comparison to Quinn, Daria snaps and scolds her mother for the poor parenting. Fleeing to her room, she uses her anger to write another story, describing laid-back Jake and Helen relaxing and chastising Quinn for her superficial teenager life, encouraging her to be like Daria, with Quinn tearfully agreeing with them before running outside and being hit by a truck. Daria also throws this story out.
 
The next day, Daria laments to Jane her lack of progress in writing, confusing her friend about what kind of story she wants to write. That evening, as Helen tries again unsuccessfully to approach her, another emergency with Jake in the kitchen gives Daria another idea: in medieval times, knight Jake meets witch Helen, demanding to see his future, but the witch insists in payment before lamenting women's lack of power. Then lighteninglightning strikes and now Knight Helen meets witch Jake, demanding to see her future, even threatening him, but Jake is more interested in tasting his brew…
 
The following day, Daria goes to see O'Neill, explains her lack of progress and frustration and requests not to write the story. The teacher encourages her instead, adding the requirement of using a game of cards in the story. Daria tries using this into the previous medieval story (this time starring [[Mack Mackenzie|Mack]] and [[Jodie Landon|Jodie]]), but ends up also throwing it away.
 
The next evening, Helen once again finds Daria slumpslumped and depressed over her lack of progress. After apologizing for her previous comments, she once again encourages Daria to write, providing her with a hint: what if, instead of using sarcasm and describing what she sees, her daughter writes about what she would like to see? Daria takes the idea and is finally able to complete her story:
 
''A few years into the future, adults Daria and Quinn visit their parents. Grey-haired Helen and Jake have now retired, with Jake having had heart surgery. As to the daughters, Daria is married to a college professor called Marcello and writes opinion columns, still defending the same ideas she had in Highhigh school, and Quinn has married Jamie and is now the mother of four kids. As the four Morgendorffers talk, Jake reveals that the family has come out as he wished: Daria is now a known activist, demanding honesty and truth, and Quinn has transformed from a fashion-obsessed teenager to a responsible mother. So now he just wants to enjoy life and has asked her daughters over to play a nice game of cards with his family. After a brief discussion, they agree on Hearts.''
 
Daria anxiously shows her mother her story. Helen, after reading it, tears up and hugs her daughter.
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==Daria's Reading Material==
 
The book Daria is reading for school is [http[wikipedia://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/On_Moral_Fiction |On Moral Fiction]] by John Gardner. Daria sounds distinctly unimpressed with it (but could be just trying to get Helen to stop talking to her).
 
Books with "moral dimensions" that O'Neill lists on the blackboard are: 1984 by George Orwell, Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain, Madame Bovary by Gustave Flaubert, Frankenstein by Mary Shelley, The Dharma Bums by Jack Kerouac, and Breakfast of Champions by Kurt Vonnegut. Considering the subject matter and style of some of these stories/writers, this list is quite surprising for O'Neill.
 
Daria's second story implies she's read Jane Austen.
Daria's second story shows familiarity enough with the tropes of 18th/19th century high-society romance novels. Did she pick this up by cultural osmosis or has she ''read'' some...?
 
==Trivia==
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In "[[Psycho Therapy]]", Daria will explain that she tries to shut down conversations with her mother because she knows Helen will "hang on every word" and that makes her feel uncomfortable.
 
ThisWe episodecan hasassume afrom homagethis tothat Daria's seen ''The Graduate'' (Kevin and Janeliked ridingit. the bus in stunned silence after the wedding).
 
Daria chooses [[Jamie White]] as Quinn's future husband. No reason is given for this choice, though whyit himmay specificallyhave wejust don'tbeen knowrandom, as "[[Lucky Strike]]" shows that she cannot keep track of which [[Three Js|J]] is which.
 
Daria also has [[Jesse Moreno]] as Jane's "suitor", though he never went after Jane in the series. An early pairing in fanfics was Jesse/Jane, however.
 
The first story with Quinn has her suffering emotionally (and then physically) because everyone wants her to be like Daria, a rather vicious revenge fantasy - Daria's final story reveals that she actually wishes she could get on with her sister, and that Quinn was a wildly different person so this could happen. Season 5 would later show Quinn and Daria getting on better without Quinn changing that much.
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==“Write Where It Hurts” and Fanfic==
 
"Marcello" keep turning up in post-canon fanfic as a boyfriend, husband, or ex-relationship of Daria's.
A [[Novelization|novelization]] of [http://www.outpost-daria.com/fanfic/ep213_write_where_it_hurts.html this episode] was written by [[Martin J. Pollard]].
 
A [[Novelization|novelization]] of [http://wwwweb.archive.org/web/20110519151817/http://outpost-daria.com/fanfic/ep213_write_where_it_hurts.html this episode] was written by [[Martin J. Pollard]].
 
"[[The Other Story of D]]", a dark counterpoint to Daria's story by [[The Angst Guy]].
 
==External Links==
* [httphttps://wwwsites.outpost-dariagoogle.com/ep213.htmlsite/dariatranscripts/213-write-where-it-hurts “Write Where It Hurts” summarytranscript] at [http://www.outpost-daria.com[Daria Outpost DariaTranscripts]]
* [http://www.outpost-daria.com/ts_ep213.html “Write Where It Hurts” transcript] at [http://www.outpost-daria.com Outpost Daria]
* [http://dariablog2.blogspot.com/2008/08/write-on.html "Write On!"] on the [[Daria Fandom Blog II]]
* [https://archiveofourown.org/works/17623430/chapters/41550539 Episode Analysis] by [[WellTemperedClavier]]
 
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